If Vivian Howard loves her hometown--and it's clear that she does--then why does she "escape" from it in the fifth paragraph? I understand that in writing lengthy articles a reporter may loose sight of the big picture, but please recall that Howard says her town is "worth a second look" in the preceding sentence. The word "escape" has the wrong connotation. Please change it.
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